Critiquing Photography Challenge Comment

Comment by Ania Czajczynski to Abigail Wilcock

Link to Abi's Blog: https://aw-portfolio.ju.mp/#art180-about

Hi Abi! First, I just wanna say I love Joji, and I'm so jealous you got to see him! But back to the assignment: I was immediately drawn to your image by the geometry of the green laser beams cutting across the sky. It also captures a super cool "can't recreate it" moment, which perfectly shows Chapter 4's time characteristic unique to photography. 

As for the main interest and composition, the way the lasers fan out across the image creates a dynamic visual that pulls your eyes across the image rather than just darting to one spot. 

I also love the contrast in this image! The way the vivid green sits against the pitch-black sky makes the colors pop, especially how the lights are coming from the blown-out white light source. Overall, this image feels energetic and whimsical, the exact energy I would expect from a concert, so I believe you captured the moment very well! 

The only thing I would do differently is adjust the exposure slightly to reduce the blown-out white color, so that most of the attention is on the laser beams and not the light source, but overall, I love this image! Great job! 

- Ania C.